i C h r i s - T A G says:
this opening is probably more fitting for you , for your current situation..
The gentle gusts stroke my tear stained face,
being the only comfort to my sorrow felt heart
churned full with with anguish and despair.
As the opaque moon shimmers over the onyx black sky,
painting a glimmering portrait of the heavens,
with stars shining like translucent diamonds,
like pearls hidden amongst the navy blue depths of the sea.
Golden lillies, luminous amongst the crystal clear lake,
blossom forth, lined with emerald green foilage,
illuminating the corners of your hidden soul - dark with
neglect, and cold from abuse.
(this should strike you somewhat - i remember reading about your past.)
As the sun rises behind the sturdy set mountain-tops,
casting a bronzed butter glow over the fallen scenery,
the fragrant winds billow forth wiping the clouds of depression,
and doubt - replacing them with the clear skies of hope
and peace.
Don't worry Elizabeth, even the darkest of nights, will give birth,
to a brilliant new tomorrow which will shatter the darkness binding,
your heart allowing your smile to be like that of a radiant dawn.
As long as we're under one sky, and one earth,
our hearts will be linked - forged through the metal of friendship,
which will last - as long as we're under that one sky.
Like a flame, your friends will melt the ice encasing your heart,
and be the warmth that keeps you smiling.
The ending is a bit weak - but it gets my point across (:
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